Options I & II
I. Breif Intro
II. Discuss concept 1/ Model 1
III. Discuss- from your own thoughts and understanding (concept 2 / Model 2)
IV. Compare / contrast
---> positve/ benifits/ drawbacks/ negitves/ contrabutions( model/ 2 main concepts)
* Teacher Feeback vs. Student
* Linear vs. Recursive
V. Commentary as a writer & student
After discussing mini topics explian how it all comes together.
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We reviewed our revised version of Draft 1.. && professor Philips gave us examples of meta- commentary/ and our feedback
Meta- commentary
1. Heres what i think they are saying & how they are similar
2. your own opinion/ response/ experiance
3. Heres how what they saw is reliable/ on- point
4. Heres how what is said connects in with the larger conversation in revision
Minerva Castillo
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