Hi :)!
Today in class Dr. Phillips picked up Draft 3 and took it for a grade. We reviewed about 2 copies and talked about them. Some things to consider are:
Overall Thoughts for the Future:
* You assert your own views for the future based on what you talked on your paper
* Reference something from your research (based on what someone said, I think..)
* Reflect on what your position were and respond in terms future, solutions.
Others:
* Make sure you tell each header how you agree with it.
* You do not need new references to support your last theory on conclusion
* Do not have to use all 5 references
* Do not have to use the 5 exact references you had first
* Use headings, as many as you want
* Be specific
* Do not be afraid to break down future or overall conclusion
* The body has to be the most well developed part
* Do not blow off conclusion!
* In each section, are you saying something ?
Dr. Phillips asked the class who was going to do PowerPoint presentations, all of our class said no, which means there will be no class May 3 or 5 since everyone chose to do the essay form, meaning today was our last day as a class. If you still do not know what Project 3 is about contact Dr. Phillips so she can give you the outline for Project 3.
Important Dates:
May 3- Post your final draft of Project 2 with your questions, comments, etc on Blogger
May 7- Post Project 3 on Blogger
May 10- Post Final paper for Project 2 on Blogger
Office Number: 381-3355
Office: COAS Bldg, Rm. 271
E-mail: phillipsk@utpa.edu
- Andrea Uriza
Friday, April 30, 2010
Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Wednesday April 28
Hi :) !
We had no class today (Wednesday April 28th). However, on Friday we do have to turn in Draft 3 of Project 2 which consists of Thoughts for the Future and Overall Conclusion.
Also DO NOT forget about Project 3 !
Dr. Phillips gave us the handout for that project on Monday so I would highly recommend you to get one if you weren't in class or you didn't grab one. As she mentioned at the beginning of the semester, you have the option to do this project in a PowerPoint or essay. If you choose to do this project as a PowerPoint you will have to go to class May 3 and May 5 to present it to the class. If you choose to do an essay, you just submit it via blog by May 7.
Dates To Remember:
April 30- Draft 3 Due
May 3 & 5- Project 3 PowerPoint Presentations Due
May 7- Project 3 Essay due (post on Blogger)
May 10- Final Project 2 Due
*Dr. Phillips
Office Number: 381- 3355
Office: COAS Bldg, Rm. 271
Office Hours:
M- 2-3 PM
T/R- 9.30-10.30 AM
OR by appointment
E-mail: phillipsk@utpa.edu
We had no class today (Wednesday April 28th). However, on Friday we do have to turn in Draft 3 of Project 2 which consists of Thoughts for the Future and Overall Conclusion.
Also DO NOT forget about Project 3 !
Dr. Phillips gave us the handout for that project on Monday so I would highly recommend you to get one if you weren't in class or you didn't grab one. As she mentioned at the beginning of the semester, you have the option to do this project in a PowerPoint or essay. If you choose to do this project as a PowerPoint you will have to go to class May 3 and May 5 to present it to the class. If you choose to do an essay, you just submit it via blog by May 7.
Dates To Remember:
April 30- Draft 3 Due
May 3 & 5- Project 3 PowerPoint Presentations Due
May 7- Project 3 Essay due (post on Blogger)
May 10- Final Project 2 Due
*Dr. Phillips
Office Number: 381- 3355
Office: COAS Bldg, Rm. 271
Office Hours:
M- 2-3 PM
T/R- 9.30-10.30 AM
OR by appointment
E-mail: phillipsk@utpa.edu
Monday, April 26, 2010
Monday, April 26th
Hi :) !
Today in class Dr. Phillips went over:
Project 2:
This Friday you will have to turn in Draft 3 which consists of Thoughts for the Future and Overall Conclusion. If you need any sort of help or you have questions about it, go to Dr. Phillip's office, she will be there. She also said sometime next week we will turn in on Blogger the Final Draft of Project 2 with questions or comments we have about our overall paper (like we did on Project 1).
Project 3:
Dr. Phillips gave us a handout of what Project 3 is about, so I would highly recommend you to get one if you weren't in class or you didn't grab one. As she mentioned at the beginning of the semester, you have the option to do this project in a PowerPoint or essay. If you choose to do this project as a PowerPoint you will have to go to class May 3 and May 5 to present it to the class. If you choose to do an essay, you just submit it via blog by May 7.
We had the teacher evaluation sheet, so we did that too.
Dates To Remember:
April 28- NO CLASS
April 30- Draft 3 Due
May 3 & 5- Project 3 PowerPoint Presentations Due
May 7- Project 3 Essay due (post on Blogger)
May 10- Final Project 2 Due
*Dr. Phillips
Office Number: 381- 3355
Office: COAS Bldg, Rm. 271
Office Hours:
M- 2-3 PM
T/R- 9.30-10.30 AM
OR by appointment
E-mail: phillipsk@utpa.edu
-Andrea Uriza
Today in class Dr. Phillips went over:
Project 2:
This Friday you will have to turn in Draft 3 which consists of Thoughts for the Future and Overall Conclusion. If you need any sort of help or you have questions about it, go to Dr. Phillip's office, she will be there. She also said sometime next week we will turn in on Blogger the Final Draft of Project 2 with questions or comments we have about our overall paper (like we did on Project 1).
Project 3:
Dr. Phillips gave us a handout of what Project 3 is about, so I would highly recommend you to get one if you weren't in class or you didn't grab one. As she mentioned at the beginning of the semester, you have the option to do this project in a PowerPoint or essay. If you choose to do this project as a PowerPoint you will have to go to class May 3 and May 5 to present it to the class. If you choose to do an essay, you just submit it via blog by May 7.
We had the teacher evaluation sheet, so we did that too.
Dates To Remember:
April 28- NO CLASS
April 30- Draft 3 Due
May 3 & 5- Project 3 PowerPoint Presentations Due
May 7- Project 3 Essay due (post on Blogger)
May 10- Final Project 2 Due
*Dr. Phillips
Office Number: 381- 3355
Office: COAS Bldg, Rm. 271
Office Hours:
M- 2-3 PM
T/R- 9.30-10.30 AM
OR by appointment
E-mail: phillipsk@utpa.edu
-Andrea Uriza
Friday, April 23, 2010
April 23, 2010
Good afternoon,
Today Dr. Philips began the class by saying the following:
* Please come on Monday April 26, 2010 because the evaluation sheets will be on that day
* on WEDNESDAY April 28, 2010 there will be no class!
* If you have any questions or comments go to Dr. Philips office during class time
*Draft 3 is due next week also
* PLEASE GO TO CLASS ON MONDAY AND FRIDAY
*On the 3rd or 5th of may if you are going to give a presentation they will be on those days
* Dr. Philips will go over the guidelines on monday for the powerpoints or essay
-In class we were asked to get into groups of 2 or 3 persons
-Each group will receive a paper from a different person and we could make comments or suggestions
-Each group will volunteer to give a paper that thought it was good for the class to see based on that Dr. Philips wil give feedback
Can you identify with these 5 points
* claim ( writers assertion)
*support ( citations and internet)
*opposition( writers voice)
*response with support
*Overthougths ( writers overall thoughts)
There were great examples throughout the class!
Thank you!
Deborah Duenas
Today Dr. Philips began the class by saying the following:
* Please come on Monday April 26, 2010 because the evaluation sheets will be on that day
* on WEDNESDAY April 28, 2010 there will be no class!
* If you have any questions or comments go to Dr. Philips office during class time
*Draft 3 is due next week also
* PLEASE GO TO CLASS ON MONDAY AND FRIDAY
*On the 3rd or 5th of may if you are going to give a presentation they will be on those days
* Dr. Philips will go over the guidelines on monday for the powerpoints or essay
-In class we were asked to get into groups of 2 or 3 persons
-Each group will receive a paper from a different person and we could make comments or suggestions
-Each group will volunteer to give a paper that thought it was good for the class to see based on that Dr. Philips wil give feedback
Can you identify with these 5 points
* claim ( writers assertion)
*support ( citations and internet)
*opposition( writers voice)
*response with support
*Overthougths ( writers overall thoughts)
There were great examples throughout the class!
Thank you!
Deborah Duenas
Monday, April 19, 2010
April 19, 2010
Good Morning
Today Dr. Philips began by reviewing what we were discussing on Friday.
Draft 1
1. Make it personal
- What point in your life did you think about entering the field?
- Did you knew since a young age?
2. Include a broad discussion of all points of research
-A reflection form all aspects of research such as
*Secondary sources
*Primary interviews
*Informal conversations
3. Specific Focus
This outline will make a good summary for Draft 1.
If you brought an outline she would look at it and show it to the class as an example. The outline was based on the top claims you picked hopefully you pulled more than one sources.
Trend 1. Issue 1.
Claim 1. Claim 2.
*support 1.
*opposition 2.
*Response with support 3.
*Overall pt. 4.
Claim 2. Claim 2.
*support 1.
*opposition 2.
*Response with support 3.
*overall pt. 4.
Hopefully you have more than 1 claim!
Each * can be a paragraph
in Opposition Dr. Philips suggested what would those say who disagree with you say?
overall point- You own personal response
In terms of organization that they are related to each other you can have a claim for both
Claim 1. Explanation how the 2 topics connect and relate to each other
Claim 2.
There could be other ways but here is a great outline to start draft 2
*opposition- can be a sentence or 2
*overall pt.- opinion ( your own version of all the material you collected)
-In proportion to your paper it should be the largest one ( since it is the body)
-Utilize headings
-Make sure if you are going the combination route make sure you have a heading to tell us there are related
We also looked at Maria's outline which was great very specific and on the right track.
Dr. Philips suggested to go back to the PowerPoint "they say I say"
it helps you from outlines, paragraphs,sources, basically understanding everything. It is on Blackboard !
NO CLASS WEDNESDAY
If you have an outline that you have doubts or questions she will be in her office 271 8:00-9:30
Please don't forget that DRAFT 2 IS DUE ON FRIDAY
make sure to bring a hard copy to class on Friday.
Thank You
Deborah Duenas
Today Dr. Philips began by reviewing what we were discussing on Friday.
Draft 1
1. Make it personal
- What point in your life did you think about entering the field?
- Did you knew since a young age?
2. Include a broad discussion of all points of research
-A reflection form all aspects of research such as
*Secondary sources
*Primary interviews
*Informal conversations
3. Specific Focus
This outline will make a good summary for Draft 1.
If you brought an outline she would look at it and show it to the class as an example. The outline was based on the top claims you picked hopefully you pulled more than one sources.
Trend 1. Issue 1.
Claim 1. Claim 2.
*support 1.
*opposition 2.
*Response with support 3.
*Overall pt. 4.
Claim 2. Claim 2.
*support 1.
*opposition 2.
*Response with support 3.
*overall pt. 4.
Hopefully you have more than 1 claim!
Each * can be a paragraph
in Opposition Dr. Philips suggested what would those say who disagree with you say?
overall point- You own personal response
In terms of organization that they are related to each other you can have a claim for both
Claim 1. Explanation how the 2 topics connect and relate to each other
Claim 2.
There could be other ways but here is a great outline to start draft 2
*opposition- can be a sentence or 2
*overall pt.- opinion ( your own version of all the material you collected)
-In proportion to your paper it should be the largest one ( since it is the body)
-Utilize headings
-Make sure if you are going the combination route make sure you have a heading to tell us there are related
We also looked at Maria's outline which was great very specific and on the right track.
Dr. Philips suggested to go back to the PowerPoint "they say I say"
it helps you from outlines, paragraphs,sources, basically understanding everything. It is on Blackboard !
NO CLASS WEDNESDAY
If you have an outline that you have doubts or questions she will be in her office 271 8:00-9:30
Please don't forget that DRAFT 2 IS DUE ON FRIDAY
make sure to bring a hard copy to class on Friday.
Thank You
Deborah Duenas
Friday, April 16, 2010
april 16th 2010
-draft one of paper 2 was due today
-took servey for Roosevelts research
-we discussed the assignment and went over some of the drafts and she took it for a grade
-*adding personality to papers(ESP in introductions)
-next paper due next week
-took servey for Roosevelts research
-we discussed the assignment and went over some of the drafts and she took it for a grade
-*adding personality to papers(ESP in introductions)
-next paper due next week
Sunday, April 11, 2010
Wednesday, April 7, 2010
april 5,7,9
No class all week but make sure you go to your confrence with Dr. philips
thanks, Joe serna
thanks, Joe serna
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