SORRY FELLOW STUDENTS

I couldnt post it yesterday because for some reason my internet was not working, and I called some guys to come and fix it and its all good now. ok

Well yesterday in class we showed our final copies to eachother and talked about them for a bit.

Ok - DOUBLE CITATIONS, here are some examples the teacher gaves us in class.

1- Research suggests that ones writing and ones ability to convey his intent depends on ( Deither 37, Sommers 36, Fitz Gerald 43)

2- Deither and Sommers agree that attitude and flexbility are used ( 34;43)

3- It appears that for writers to embrace revision they need to approach it with an open attitude: In fact Deither states .......(34) Sommers also agrees when she says ........(43)

And if you can come up with some new citation then go for it.

DATES:

Outline- Tomorrow October 28 Thursday

Draft 1- November 2 Tuesday

Draft 2 - November 9 Tuesday

Draft 3- November 16 Tuesday

Final Draft- November 18 Thursday

and remember that this essay should have 1-3 main questions, non text-based examples, and multiple headings.

I aslo wrote this down.... "Meta-Commentary"

1.significance and importance

2.relation to overall topic

3.connection with the other sources(literature)

4.your own thoughts as a writer